Notes
Outline
The Six Traits of Writing
Six Traits of Good Writing
"Show the speaker’s personality"
Show the speaker’s personality
when you choose your VOICE.
Then strengthen every sentence
with the trait we call WORD CHOICE.
ORGANIZATION will give structure
to the story you are telling.
CONVENTIONS make you an editor.
Be to check your spelling!
"Focus on SENTENCE FLUENCY."
Focus on SENTENCE FLUENCY.
Write sentences short and long.
Use clear IDEAS and lots of details.
You really can’t go wrong.
VOICE
My paper sounds like me.
My paper is different from everyone else’s.  It is unique.
My paper shows how I feel.
My paper is lively and exciting.
My paper is fun to read.
WORD CHOICE
My words paint a picture in the reader’s mind.
There aren’t any words that are repeated too often.
I have used strong action words (verbs).
I have used specific nouns to identify people, places and things.
I have used descriptive adjectives.
I haven’t used boring and overused words.
ORGANIZATION
CONVENTIONS
My paper isn’t one huge paragraph.  Each new idea has its own paragraph and is indented.
There are no spelling errors.
Capitalization is used correctly.
Sentences are punctuated correctly.
I left spaces between words.
I left margins on the sides.
SENTENCE FLUENCY
IDEAS
My paper has a message or makes a point.
Each paragraph is related to the main idea.
My paragraphs have clear details that support the main idea.
My paper sticks to the main idea and I left out details that do not matter.
My paper has enough information.
SCORING RUBRIC
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DO YOU REMEMBER?
This gives structure to the story you are telling.
Organization
This shows the writer’s personality.
Voice
Spelling, punctuation and capitalization
Conventions
This will strengthen every sentence.
Word choice
Sentences both long and short
Sentence fluency
Lots of details will help here
Ideas